Suggested improvement
Let me tell you the story of when I was working as a hunter. It was
before I began working for this company. Actually, I changed jobs
because my previous job was too dangerous.
So one day we went to hunt a crocodile in a pool. When we found the
crocodile my boss explained to me that after we shoot and kill it, I
should attach the car’s winch to the crocodile’s tail. Then we can
lift it out of the water, remove the skin and sell it to a factory.
Anyway, they shot the crocodile and it appeared to be dead. although
it wasn’t really. It seemed to be sleeping in the water. Besides, I
know that crocodiles don’t normally die in water, they usually get
out and die outside on the ground. So I was really scared and afraid
to go in. But my boss said ‘go and put the winch on the tail’.
So I took off my clothes and went into the pool. It was very muddy
so I got in slowly. The crocodile looked at me, and now I was really
close. It opened it’s mouth and came for me. It wanted to eat me! So
I dropped down into the mud and started swimming away. I got out at
another place and the crocodile didn’t catch me. They shot it again
and it died. And that’s the story of the day when the crocodile
wanted to get me.
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